Star Twirling
Star Twirling
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Can I have your thoughts on this poem?
Aurora Borealis
Lady Aurora, beauty personified,
dancing in the night skies;
Queen of the heavens
in swishing skirts of light
twirling amongst the stars.
How could you be so far
from this adoring heart,
the eyes you inspire?
You paint the darkness
between me
and the worlds beyond;
you touch my soul with
a glorious glimpse
of the eternal power
in that great somewhere
where you are.
I am small indeed,
but when you dance
I am not afraid;
I am no longer alone.
It does not move me as much as your poetry usually does.
could be I am on an off day
It is lovely none the less, but I think you should give it a little bit more essence to make it reach out if you would...
You write beautifully and you can only make it better with your own instinct.
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